Wednesday, February 16, 2011

Super hero

If I was a super hero this is how it would start......

One day I woke up and was wanting to grab my shoes but they were under the bed so I went to pick up my bed and all of a sudden it was in the air with only my index finger holding it up. My brother yield out to me and said hurry up we have to go to school then i ran as fast as I could in only one second i was out side ready to go school. I was like wow I went faster than a Cheddar. I said to my brother do you want are race he said yes and then I ran and only one second I was by the school gate my brother was still running then I said bye then he went to his school.

The bell rang and I raced for the class door and was there before Mr Somerville could even unlock the door and open it. I realized some thing is in me since this morning. So then it was time to walked home with my cousin to his house we ended up playing cricket we were fielding my cousin hit the ball and it went to jump I went high and it was like I was flying grabbed the ball and threw it at the wicket but I realized I was still in the air. My name would be bold blade I'm super fast and can fly most of all I am super strong I can lift anything i don't have muscles but I'm still strong its like I'm holding an apple seed.

I figured if I use my powers for good not evil i could fight crimes and help cops defeat the bad Id combine all of my powers to help. Id fly super fast and hold very heavy things on a trip any where. Id make sure to hide me in a fantastic disease. When I find out who is my Villain ill defeat her and make sure she never touches our planet.


  1. WOW,Thats a really great story about your Superhero. Well keep up this writing so you can get better at it. GREAT WORK.......From Tauwhare

  2. Hi Andrea,
    That is a wonderful picture. You have a long paragraph and lots of key ideas. You are well at making stories maybe I can read our other stories thats well. Keep u[ the story I want to hear another great story about another superhero.

  3. Thank you tauwhare and turuhira.


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